2016年管理類聯(lián)考英語二大作文解析及范文

48.Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. you should
1) interpret the chart and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points).

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【參考范文】

Portrayed in the above pie chart is a survey of college students’ purposes of traveling. The number of students who take traveling as a chance to see beautiful scenes accounts for 37%, while students who would like to travel to relieve pressure from study take up 35 %.

There are several reasons behind the trend revealed in the above chart. To begin with, as the present society is filled with fierce competition, most college students nowadays are under great pressure to stand out among others or to lunch a decent job after graduation. Therefore, they tend to choose traveling as an outlet to relieve their stress. Secondly, with the fast advancement of the living standards of Chinese families, traveling is increasingly affordable to most college students. For this reason, students prefer to travel to see different views to enjoy themselves or to make some friends.

From my perspective, no matter what reason it is for, traveling is of great benefit for students to acquire a broader perspective of life. If time permits, we college students should go to see the outside world more often.

作文解析

今年英語二作文的題目比較好寫，因為標題和圖示非常清晰明白。圖表顯示了某高校學生旅游目的調(diào)查, 考生分析原因的話也會很簡單。下面分三段簡要地說一下這三段應該怎么寫。

第一段主要是描述圖表。圖表一目了然，數(shù)量詞百分比也是大家熟悉的詞匯，表述數(shù)據(jù)時，圖中有四五組數(shù)據(jù)，由于字數(shù)的限制以及為了寫作的便利可以突出較大比例的“欣賞風景”和“緩解壓力”，注意引入百分比的表達方式。

第二段給出你的評論，主要寫這種情況的原因。主要要結合圖表描述的內(nèi)容從兩個方面寫起。一方面為什么為了欣賞風景而旅行的目的占37%， 另一方面為什么緩解壓力會占到33%比例。