2014年考研英語一大作文

Part B

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1）describe the drawing briefly,

2）interpret its intended meaning, and

3）give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET (20 points)

解析： 2014年的大作文從總體上來看不難，因為它考查到了現(xiàn)在的一個社會熱點。而且從十年的考研真題來講，2005年的大作文考查到的是贍養(yǎng)老人的問題，當年的圖畫是可憐的老父親縮成了一只皮球，四個兒女守著四個球門，老人被兒女們踢來踢去。當年全國考生平均分10.88分，難度系數(shù)0.544，區(qū)分度為0.64764。當年的描述圖畫部分比較難表達，而今年圖畫描述部分相比起來就容易得多。下面我們就從寫作的標準三段式來講講這三段我們應該怎么寫。

第一段圖畫描述段的寫作內容主要是表述圖畫，需包括兩點：三十年前是個什么樣子，現(xiàn)在是什么樣子。三十年前“我”還是個孩子，母親大手拉小手陪伴著我成長;現(xiàn)在，母親上年紀了，我快樂地陪伴在母親的身旁。其實第一段還有兩個需要注意的地方，一是題目要求是一幅圖，大家在寫作時盡量按照一幅圖畫去處理;二是圖畫下面的漢字“相攜”比較難翻譯，不過大家可以意譯為陪伴。這兩個地方不是大問題，因為它相對于作文要考查考生書面表達的要求來說是微不足道的。

第二段是圖畫涵義闡釋段。本段可分兩個方面來具體寫。一方面具體寫明要照顧老人，因為他們?yōu)槲覀兏冻隽俗约旱那啻?另一方面，我們要關愛兒童的成長，因為他們是我們的未來，祖國的希望。

第三段評論段的寫作內容為給出自己的評論和建議?？梢灾赋瞿贻p人應該把尊重和照顧

年邁的父母視為一種道義責任。另外，父母也要關注孩子的成長。只有這樣，我們的家庭才能和睦，社會才能更加和諧!

參考例文：

As is vividly described in the left part of the drawing, thirty years ago, there stood a delicate mother, holding the tiny hand of a lovely girl, who wore a red scarf. On the contrary, the right part of the picture illustrates that with time flying quickly, the little girl, who has already grown up as a gorgeous lady, is supporting her old mother. We are informed: accompanying.

It is without saying that the old and the young are two indispensable parts in society. On the one hand, what we have and enjoy now was created by our parents in the early days, as the old Chinese saying goes, "One generation plants tress under whose shade another generation rests". On the other hand, all of us are supposed to take good care of the youngsters, too. It is children who make us see the future of our state, for they are the future builders of our country.

The young should consider it a moral obligation respecting and taking care of old parents. Meanwhile, it is also the duty of the parents to protect, educate and look after the youths. Let's bear this in mind and cultivate that virtue together, because only by doing so, can we feel as if we were living in a happy and harmonious family.